You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from, and how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain what ideas were taken from which group member and why for the final products - whose final product did you decide to go with and why 2) Include images of final products etc.
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining some ideas that you took on board from your research, as well as explaining how you, as a group, came up with the final ideas for your ancillary texts. You have included pictures of each individual ancillary, as well as the final group one, but still need to clarify what ideas were taken from each group member and why.
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ReplyDeleteYou have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from, and how you came to a final decision.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Explain what ideas were taken from which group member and why for the final products - whose final product did you decide to go with and why
2) Include images of final products etc.
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining some ideas that you took on board from your research, as well as explaining how you, as a group, came up with the final ideas for your ancillary texts. You have included pictures of each individual ancillary, as well as the final group one, but still need to clarify what ideas were taken from each group member and why.
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